100 word challenge: …so that is why i am always last…

I was taking my dog for a walk when I heard a strange noise coming from behind some trees. I walked over and looked behind them. I couldn’t believe it! There was a frozen mummy standing right in front of me! I walked over to it and inspected it closely. Suddenly it spoke. “I have cursed you with an ancient curse. If you ever come first in anything you will die!” It said in a raspy voice. Then it disappeared. Now, I didn’t know whether to believe him or not, but I decided to just in case. So that is why I am always last.

2 thoughts on “100 word challenge: …so that is why i am always last…

  1. Ha Ha very funny. I like how it was really unbelievable that is how all the great excuses go. Nice 100 word challenge man

  2. Hi Hamish
    I really liked how you made it a scary theme I also liked your word choice [raspy] and I think the storyline was really good the only thing you could improve on could be a different genre like si-fi
    other then that I enjoyed the 100wc.

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