100 word challenge- The thief that got raked, steaked and breaked for stealing my cake that took hours and hours and hours to bake.

I hate that person who stole my cake

And that is why I dumped them in the lake.

All day I had worked on my fabulous cake

It took hours and hours and hours to bake.

Then the thief stole my fabulous cake!

I was angry, so I whacked him with a rake.

His neck I was about to break.

But instead I whacked him with a steak

And then I went and dumped him in the lake

I did it for everyone’s sake!

He made a very big mistake.

I bet now his head will ache.

 

 

One thought on “100 word challenge- The thief that got raked, steaked and breaked for stealing my cake that took hours and hours and hours to bake.

  1. Well done Hamish on this fun rhyming poem. We’ll be looking at rhyme in a lesson coming up- see if you can extend the types of rhyme and rhyme pattern you use after seeing the possibilities in the lesson
    Great work
    Ant

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