100 word challenge: Escaping death

Exactly one year ago I escaped death. I was wondering down the streets when the grim reaper attacked me. He started smothering me so I couldn’t breath. I fell to the ground, gasping for breath. Then I saw a strange glowing stick. I picked it up and immediately knew what to do. I stood up, pointed the glowing stick at the grim reaper and yelled “Configadazilikarubartimambibusincakino!”. A green streak of light flew out of the end of the stick and froze the grim reaper. Nowadays you can find it at Greenlich National Park, right in the middle.

One thought on “100 word challenge: Escaping death

  1. Hi Hamish,

    This is a really creative idea! The idea of being attacked by the Grim Reaper is very scary. Your punctuation is all very accurate and effective. Your first sentence is particularly good at gripping the reader.

    Thanks for taking part in 100WC this week.
    Hannah (Team 100) -Birmingham, UK

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